Devolpment of double page spread

My original double page spread didn't give the desired effects so many improvements were made. 

Firstly starting at the top my original double page spread didn't make use of the larges amount of space that could be used to display the title. this was a problem as it didn't draw attention and instantly grab the reader as i wanted it to. So by keeping my house style and color theme i maximized the title by splitting it across the double page spread and using two three different text types too create a professional looking title that included the bands on style of title. By using skew i was able to rotate the text slightly, by doing this it also draws more attention to the title, giving a more desired effect of drawing the audience in.

Secondly by organizing the text into more organised and clear columns the reader is able to quickly skim read or read in depth. By adding in the pull quote in the middle, also draws attention to the main article.

The main image i moved to the left hand side as i thought the article looked better on the right hand side, and then  continuing with the preexisting colors within the picture. I then add a pull quote into the picture.